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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol the first thing I had to say as I read the end of chapter 10 was 'oh shit!' Damn Shika for being so smart x.x
Aww... man, that part where Naruto got to hear his baby's heart; so emotional ;_; I loved it.
Again, love this story more as I read it..
Please update soon~
Aww... man, that part where Naruto got to hear his baby's heart; so emotional ;_; I loved it.
Again, love this story more as I read it..
Please update soon~
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story cant wait to read more plz update soon!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh me, I was literally banging my head on the computer screen when I read that shikamaru found out, but I do like shikamaru. SHIKA SHIKA. anyway, I wonder what's going to happen next, that situation really sucked, oMG I can't belive it. Great now I can't wait to read the next chapter, and why does naruto ask so much questions? I thought for a minute there that Gaara would be annoyed but I guess not, I LURVE GAARA! okay now that I got that out of my system, update soon, ya here*_*
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn.... but at least when shika hears naru's story he won't tell.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. i'm really not a fan of first person pov. but your story is so good, i over look it.i can't wait for the next chapter. the suspence is killing me, what will naruto do, what will shikamaru do?
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dang man, shikamaru foud him out. now wat will happen? cant wait to read more. this sotry is getting good and i wonder if sasuke will show up anytime soon. oh well guess i hav to wait. until then. :D
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW I Love this story please please please UPDATE SOON
THanks!!!!!!!!
I'm Me For A Reason
THanks!!!!!!!!
I'm Me For A Reason
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally. im soo curious as to what will happen next. XD
update soon please!
update soon please!
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto
update soon
update soon
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffhanger! Shikamaru put the peices together a lot faster than I was expecting him to. Bam! How much will Naruto tell him? How much will Naruto not tell him? I trust Shikamaru to have Naruto's best interests in mind, but it still makes me nervous to have more people know where Naruto is. *worried*