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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

person gaara89
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice can't wait for the next one.
person Rose
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, well the last 2, keep up the good work.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't like neji he's stupid. well i'm tired. i liked it and i'm glad you thought my joke was cute hehehe well as i have stated many times i can't wait for the next chapter.
person qwerty
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Neji is so falling for Menma. I love Menma! I was so sad when he died in canon. :(
update!
person Damp
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Various decent and indecent thoughts involving the blue eyed teen flashed through his mind. Soon very soon he would have his blond back and even a child to mold into the perfect Hyuuga heir.

DIE Neji!! How rude of you to think that way! I can't stand men like you!!! DIE!!!!!


As for Chapter 22, I couldn't stop laughing! Honest to god, I thought for sure I'd die LAUGHING (Not that I'd mind!) That was just really weird for me to imagine HAKU as a priest. I had to reread that paragraph several times before it was able to succesfully enter my brain without having a meltdown.

-Damp *Punching a punching bag with Neji's face screaming 'Why! Won't! You! DIE!!' *
person Damp
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, had to reveiw again, I just have one question.

Why, after all this time, have the paparrazi JUST NOW are appearing?? I mean, this is the first time I've read the paparrazi come up. You've mentioned them eariler on, but I've never actually read them in action in the fic before.

?????

-Damp *No matter how many times I puch this things, it never seems to DIE! (refering to the Neji punching bag)*
person jj
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why dident u let me know when u added the new chapters i realy like this story so when u finish the other chapters pleasssssssssssssssssse.
person LadyWolf
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Cute!!!!!!!! I love the little hellions!!!!!!!!
person gaara89
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA SNAKE PUKE! I love that name. I think you should write to the Naruto writers and have them change Orochimaru's name to snake puke.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Comedy, Psychotic Gaara, a lemon, with a little bit of BDSM.....it can't get much better than this. lol Another GREAT chapter. If you make another story after this one, I am definantly gonna read it too. ^_^

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