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person candy
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it love it
person babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! I'm glad I took you serious on the rated R and from what you told me. This is going to be a really good fic. Hell it already is. Somehow, I don't know how, I laughed at Legolas's reaction, jumping up into a fighting stance in the bath tub! lol though the visions are a totally different story and far more serious. That sucks. Can't wait to see what the next chapter will be and so on. :)
Brenda
person babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can see that Janessa is a bit of a smart ass here and there. not in an annoying way, but makes it interesting. I can see a reflection almost from those remarks in the story as if they were real. Maybe because it's written how you would say it. :) which is good by the way. People always write best when it can have some inpact on life in sort of way. :) keep in touch. Of course would love to read more when you have it ready. :)
Brenda
person PharaohsBeloved
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story! write more!
person KnowInsight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
I hope to see more.
Am ^_^
person Babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter. Especially that scene with Legolas. Though I'm interested to know why he needed that silk, though I can guess many many things. lol well I'll talk to you later. :) love to read more. :)
Brenda
person Lillie
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! where is the rest, this is too good to be left this way! *cries* but if you're busy and all, then i really can't do anything about it anyway...lol...

but seriously, this is good, and i personally would like to see more.

*waves*
person KnowInsight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, good chap.
More please.
Am ^_^
person babmidnight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well that's interesting bringing in her old weapon, the sword, or as it's called, Katana. It's amazing how you lose things and then you find it. lol Good chapter. I liked how you put Pat and Ed in the background later, noticing that all the memories were slowly coming back to her. Keep writing. Very good story. :)
Brenda
person KnowInsight
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My newest story is also the only one updating. ^_^
Kewl beans.
Well that it's actually being updated, not that my other ones aren't.
Good and promising story too.
Hope to see more soon.
Am ^_^

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