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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is awesome! Altho I was disappointed that was was just dreaming lol. You're a very good writer. Keep up the great work!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ali,
I dont generally read these things since most sound like they are coming from a 14 year old trying to mimic something they've heard or read. I just read the first chapter, and I think its wonderful. Very believeable, almost like you have really experienced such a morning. I will continue to read, and most likely enjoy it! Keep up the great writing!
Janna
I dont generally read these things since most sound like they are coming from a 14 year old trying to mimic something they've heard or read. I just read the first chapter, and I think its wonderful. Very believeable, almost like you have really experienced such a morning. I will continue to read, and most likely enjoy it! Keep up the great writing!
Janna
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe after all this time and anxiety that they finally get together and it's only a dream! Are these two ever going to get there in real life?
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wags finger while laughing* You really had me going there for a minute. Thought they finally got it together then you pull the ultimate fake out and make the entire love scene a dream. Very good writing.
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well this conversation should be interesting! I wonder if Adriana is going to tell Orli about 'John' or just fob him off?? Loving the alternating POV's btw - it's always so interesting to see how 2 people view the same circumstances so differently. Update again soon please!
Marie :-)
Marie :-)
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was mean! *S*
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm...I think I need to take a cold shower to! LOL - Very, *very* hot chapter Ali. Pity it was just a dream. Then again I guess we have the 'real' thing to look forward to now. Please, please update again soon.
Marie :-)
Marie :-)
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story istasttastic, I keep checking back for updates like everyday. The tension and unwavering friendship is wonderful and you write it so well. I hope to see more of it soon. That is if Baby doesn't get annoyed and kill Orli before he explains himself.
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! I like it alot! Please keep going with it.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ali this is such a great story. I'm really enjoying the alternating points of view and the kind of diary style narrative style. And I tend to agree with you - Adriana isn't a Mary Sue (thank goodness!). So where are we headed now that Orli has gone and kissed her?? Please come back and update soon.
Marie :-)
Marie :-)