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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, the pool! I wonder what lays there! Thanks for the update! Another great chapter; I absoluteoy love how you construct both Amarie and Haldir's inner turmoil. These two need to learn how to communicate better! I eagerly await your next installment.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh sorry. i was reading too fast and i just miss read the part where haldir offers an arm to her and she thought that shlt llt like a 16 yr old. oups. sorry about that. great chapters by the way. its fun where ferodir does the stuff he does. he's my favorate character in the story. i also like the plot and path that this story is goin. i hope u update this story soon.
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it!!!! I'm totally hooked and can't wait to read more! Great job!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chapter. What a treat to find it this morning after I just read through chaps. 1-5; I thought I would have to wait a few days for chap. 6. I have nothing but praise for this story. The last scene was nothing less than explosive and I can't wait to see what Haldir has to say about Amarie's n dis discovered fluency. Can't wait to read Chapter 7!!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Another chapter SO soon- what luck! I loved the inner turmoil Haldir went through post- his 'discussion' with Amarie; is she truly deceitful or just young and naive? And throwing Ferodir in the mix was genius. I'm totally addicted and can't wait to see where this will all lead. I also find the fact that Ferodir is an Empath quite intriguing. Thank you!!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you portray Haldir. Amarie is also a wonderful character, one I can rela......well, this story is wonderful, and I hope it is continued soon.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times I see this story, it just gets better
Amarie is such a good character and Haldir...perfection. :)
Amarie is such a good character and Haldir...perfection. :)