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for Captured by the rules of the book

by loveforelves

person HHS
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to shoot Celeborn dead!!!DEAD!!!
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the reviews, i really appreciate them ^_^ I'll post chapter five already, cause tomorrow i wont write for three and a half days, because i got to go on a school trip
person ElvenPadfoot
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
continue please?? its starting to get good!! that was mean what celeborn did to legolas...but still a good story so far
person Setare
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I hope you will continue soon and hopefully with a happy end for Haldir and Legolas.
person ElvenPadFoot
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you should keep going...!
person HHS
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Legolas!Just say so if you want Haldir or not.The truth might be helpful you know.
person kirameki
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot and hope you continue it. The only thing I found odd was that you said Legolas loved him not just lusted him, but according to the earlier chapter they only spoke 2 or 3 times in the 20 years Legolas had been there(unless I misunderstood something). I find it unlikely he could have so deep an emotion already with someone he hardly knows. Other than that, though it was great and I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good point, perhaps i should have chosen other kind of words...i mean, Legolas does love haldir but more in the way of lusting after, or perhaps i should say Legolas is in love with haldir...like a crush...anyhow, i think you're right and will try to change it
person ElvenPadFoot
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
looks to turn out really good. i always love L/H stories, they are the greatest! good luck with writting this.
person ElvenPadfoot
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! its a great start

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