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for The White City

by ElvenDemagogue

person Rangerlady
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Review Me - I could use the happy."

Oh dear, I hope everything is more or less alright on your side of the big pond?
person Rangerlady
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@ Kaitlyn:

Mmmh... knowing our two writing ladies, I would say, Haldir has a fat chance of becoming the romantic counterpart in this one. The way they portrayed him, the lookhe ahe attitude... YUP, Haldir it will be! :D
person Giggles
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story so far. Your writing is very entertaining. I can't wait to read more!!
person Rangerlady
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I know "In Darkness And In Doubt" is written by your partner in crime, lol. But I also know that screaming at you for another chapter always makes you tell her to get a move on with her s. ;). ;) See? I know by now how to get you two off the couch and at your laptop on a regular basis! :)

Anyway, hooked as always and I will be interested to see where this new story of yours is heading. And yes, I can live with the zipper, lol! I just thought I'd mention it and hope you didn't mind me doing so.

Lots of greetings from springtime Europe, where it is a lovely, sunny day today. Mmmh... I think I will treat myself to some Italian icecream after work! :)
person Rangerlady
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, ladies! ;) Sorry, this is another short review, but I am still busy as sin. I was really glad to see you post another story, st hst have one est:est: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't forget about "In darkness and in doubt" and "World on Fire"! I want to see the rest of those two as well (yup, call me greedy *g*...).

Oh and about "The White City": Cout bet be this is an older story? The reason I am asking is the fact that the "lip licking thingie" is back - and so is "the zipper", lol! Sorry ladies, no such thing in Middle Earth! ;)

Anyway, greetings from "Old Europe" and keep up the good work, have a great week.
person Rangerlady
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, ladies! ;) Sorry, this is another short review, but I am still busy as sin. I was really glad to see you post another story, I juave ave one request: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't forget about "In darkness and in doubt" and "World on Fire"! I want to see the rest of those two as well (yup, call me greedy *g*...).

Oh and about "The White City": Could it be this is an older story? The reason I am asking is the fact that the "lip licking thingie" is back - and so is "the zipper", lol! Sorry ladies, no such thing in Middle Earth! ;)

Any gre greetings from "Old Europe" and keep up the good work, have a great week.

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