rate_review Reviews

That's one heck of a story! And I mean it in a good way. lol. I found your story through the beta reader section. As a fellow LotR writer, I would be more than happy to try and assist you with your story. That is, if you still require a beta. The general story is good. Some areas are a bit confusing, and the spelling and grammar need some work, but other than that, it's a wonderful piece.

Yuki.

I really like this. I can perfectly understand Eowyn's longing for some "rougher" treatment. Hehe. I hope you update soon. (Also, I could catch a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing that a beta couldn't easily fix. Have you got a beta?)