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for Painful Sanctuary

by MystiLamb

person anais
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gods, this is depressing...but pretty good too!
person Jasg
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I like your story. Something different from the slash stuff. Keep on writing. Hope to read your next chapter soon. Thanks
person Anna
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good. I think you have Haldir's character down pretty good. I look forward to reading more of your story. Please keep posting as soon as you can!! :)
person Lady of Legolas
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Haldir is starting to care for those two humans.More please!!!
person crazy_she_elf
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aww this is so sad :( and really good too, please write more soon!
person Lady Death Cat
schedule April 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOO!
I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!
You wrote the story (so far) very well! I like the way you had Haldir and Orophin
comfort the two of them. Please have anouther chapter up. I don't want to pressure
you though, ^_~ so Good Luck! and GREAT JOB!
person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who cares about the run-on sentences. Please update soon, this is really good stuff.
person ie{�ie
schedule March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far hope you keep writing!!
person Lady of Legolas
schedule March 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Haldir.So arrogant but so brave also.Please help those two kids.
person CarhuineMalthenel
schedule March 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love it! I can't wait to see where this leads to! More please! lol I hope you update soon (as I know how slow I am) I hope it is soon! Diola lle (Thank you in Sindarin elvish). I can't wait for more :)

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