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January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good so far I can't wait till you put up chapter four.
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May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please write more
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January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, however you need a better beta. One who knows how to correct the spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Your beta missed too many. It's a wonderful thing to say these points are not important to a story but they are. An otherwise perfect story is damaged by such deficits. Yours can be a wonderful story with the appropriate corrections.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HURRY!!!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is funny and I just can't wait until he gets his hands on elrohir
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Other then the father/son stuff i loved it.
Very good story.
I hope that Ellandal (spelling?) doesn't warn his brother.
Love the story.
Please update soon.
Very good story.
I hope that Ellandal (spelling?) doesn't warn his brother.
Love the story.
Please update soon.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh you are SUCH a great writer i like this story i hope you finish it!!! UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update!