rate_review Reviews

Very good writing, with lovely dialogue. Their personalitites and relationship are being nicely developed. Please keep going!

great beginning... i'm always pleased to run across an ecthelion story, and this one is shaping up to be quite good. their innocence and comfort with each other is nice. i wonwhatwhat difficulties they'll encounter later? can't wait to find out.
i enjoy all the LOTR stories you've posted -- i love checking back and finding something new -- good job!

cv

that was the CUTEST pre-slash i've ever read! nice work!

So cuteess...Thy are cute together! *drool* and sexy