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i really like ur story. i even like how u began the story. the way that naipha traveled to middle-earth made sense and the story takes on different myths too. this sotry is really sweet and flows somewhat smoothly. however there are quite a few grammer and spelling errors, not to mention the format of how u wrote the chapters are a bit hard to follow without my eyes growing tired. i suggest putting spaces in between each paragraph. i look forward to ur next chapter.

Yeah, but see I heard that the all over gaelic language was composed of Finnish, gaelic, latin and something else that I can;t remember. I just don;t know any Finnish so I did mainly Gaelic/ Latin for the elves. Hey! At least it's partly correct! : )

Awwww how sweet!
PS: Sindarin is aminly Finnish yeh so thats Gaelic/Latin? Huh...

Ooooh I like it! Well written; a coule spelling errors, but I LOVE the style!!! Keep going!

Oooh he's posessed! Wheeeeeee! Again, LoVe your take!

wow...great plot line! hope that there is more coming!

What an interesting twist to your tale! I love the idea of faeries vs elves :)
I can't wait for the next installment... more, please! :)