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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a really good story but the ending came up a little short, everythign just ended so quickly....anyways good story
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! That can't be it. It was just getting intense. Oh well, at least Rian ended up with Elijah. I hope she will be happy from now on. I feel sorry for Orlando's new girlfriend though. What a bastard! He needs to be knocked down a few pegs and see how he likes it. At least Rian stood up to him. Now maybe she can get on with her life. This was an AWESOME story and I think you should post more! :)
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Rian is okay. I still can't believe that orlando did that. And now he has the nerve to ask her to marry him. I hope and pray that she doesn't except because I think he is only asking her so that he can have a tighter hold on her. I'm still hoping that she will go away with Elijah. update soon. :)
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP! You can't stop there! I'm dying. Oh god. I'm dying. When is the next update? I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS. Gah. -prays for an update-
Great, amazing, wonderful work. I could just kiss you for writing this! Mwuah!
Sydney
Great, amazing, wonderful work. I could just kiss you for writing this! Mwuah!
Sydney
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She better not say yes and Elijah had better walk in and beat the crap out of evil orli or i'll i'll......
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!! I cant belive she would ever even consider going back to him!! That was crazy and where the heck is Elijah? Anyways good chapter and I cant wait for you to update soon
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! you can't just leave it there!!! post more ASAP!!
~Sari
~Sari
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, now i REALLY hate orlando! how could he do that. i hope that rian is ok. i think it's time for her to leave for good. keep writing. :)
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave it there! Oh. Cliffhangers. Agh! -crosses fingers for another update-.
I'm loving this! Keep up the great work!
I'm loving this! Keep up the great work!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't ever leave a cliff hanger like that again. u did it in this chapter, and you did it in the last one. grrr!!! no more cliff hangers! i can't stand the wait!!1