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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person sasalou
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you had a great vacation and that you will update soon. This one of the most enjoyable stories have ever read.
person TopazKat
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you enjoy your time at the con. It's always such fun to read your stories. I do like the image of Glorfindel tormenting poor Erestor with strawberries and honey.
person Blushing
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry! I havn't been able to review! We've had thunderstorms raving for (what feels like) weeks!

It's a great chapter! Maybe "Baabaa" is drawn too sharp things because he is considering to become a sword-dancer (don't know if they excist:P) or something:P

Love the chapter and Taurcalad is all I want from a man:) sadly he is 1)gay 2)taken by Thoniel 3)not real, I'm pouting constantly now:(
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes indeed a bit of life with a bang of slash very nice! a good bang slash story is nice for the afternoon but a good story with plot and life and interesting characters is breakfast, lunch, and dinner, if you get what i mean...more!!!! we needs seconds!!
person TopazKat
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's sweet that Thoniel is letting Taurcalad to hold him. And I still find Glorion so cute and amusing. He's chattering so much, yet still poking at swords. He's probably going to be both very smart and a skilled warrior (look out).
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
once again another great chapter! i love how you do the characters and how they interact its seems more real life and not...um weird i guess, anyway i love your stuff!!! more more more! oh i just updated as well!
person TopazKat
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Gwee is to share the ring with Elrond? Wow... no wonder Erestor is in such a state, that is very scary, yet very cool
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Well, at least giving Elrond's ring to Cirdan allowed Thoniel to see that Taurcalad is not going to hurt him. but I have to wonder what the ring in Thranduil's hands will cause to the land of Imladris.
person Blushing
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The scene where they nearly drowned was so sweet! And I adore the tattoo, but didn't his brother have weapons too?
person Marille
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL an aggressive wood-elf wearing Vilya. That is funny. I love your ideas.

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