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for Immortality

by jalynne

schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update! I have really enjoyed the first four chapters and would really, really enjoy reading more :-)

Your characters are fun and well fleshed out. Do please continue!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I've been checking daily since you added the new chapter. Any news, new chapter or are you done? Consider this a poke.
person Kalima
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story and enjoying it very much. I admit at first I wasn't going to read it because I've never thought the idea of a male being pregnant made any sense (how does one identify a female then?) but I started, and the writing was good, so I got sucked in, so to speak. So thank you! I hope you are still writing it. You know how frustrating it is to be invested in a story only to have it never finish.
person Sione
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that this has only one review! I think it's great so far, it's well-written and I love your characterization. I'm very much looking forward to reading the rest. I really hope that you update soon because it would be a shame if you didn't continue this great story. Keep up the good work!
person ao
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe no one's reviewed this story! it's amazing in detail and characterization and i hope you plan on writing more of it at some point. :)

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