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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I wouldn't mind seeing more to this. It was a really inttingting idea. XD
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Made me laugh!
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! How about an sequel??? I can`t imagine Eliahs face at the end of the story ;-))). Please go on writing!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH! Write MORE!
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the last paragraph, that awkward moment.
I also like:
"Got feet in two hours."
And the fact the Sean Bean is known simply as "Bean". Lol.
I also like:
"Got feet in two hours."
And the fact the Sean Bean is known simply as "Bean". Lol.
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woah...yes yes I spotted the incredibly MASSIVE injoke *lol* (oh how we love that girl)
I liked the footnotes :D
And you must stop taking Dom/Orli away from Lijah like that. He'll come after you in chapter three if you're not careful *wink*
That was really sweet. Bless em all. Bless you.
Bless the bees and the bees.
keeses, evil xxx
I liked the footnotes :D
And you must stop taking Dom/Orli away from Lijah like that. He'll come after you in chapter three if you're not careful *wink*
That was really sweet. Bless em all. Bless you.
Bless the bees and the bees.
keeses, evil xxx
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hobbitised, hobbitated..
~slumps into a little heap~ I *almost* feel sorry for Lij. Exce Dom DomOrli. ~growr~
~lick~ I lurrve ya.
~slumps into a little heap~ I *almost* feel sorry for Lij. Exce Dom DomOrli. ~growr~
~lick~ I lurrve ya.
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this bit (and I'm even gonna change the formatting). I like the way Orli deals with the conversation, I like how thick Lij is. And I giggled at the in-joke!
"*And* that doesn't, like, freak you ou
"He's a great kisser."
"Jesus-motherfucking-Christ." Was *everybody* in England fucking queer? "You made out with Dominic?"
"No, I didn't 'make out' with Dom." Orli's tone was mocking-bordering-on-punching-Lij's-fucking-lights-out.
"You didn't make out with him, but you know he's a great kisser?"
"Don't concern yourself with it." Orlando paid for his beer and got up from the bar. "And Lij?"
"Yeah?"
"Grow up, mate."
Good 'un, matey. I always love Domorli!
"*And* that doesn't, like, freak you ou
"He's a great kisser."
"Jesus-motherfucking-Christ." Was *everybody* in England fucking queer? "You made out with Dominic?"
"No, I didn't 'make out' with Dom." Orli's tone was mocking-bordering-on-punching-Lij's-fucking-lights-out.
"You didn't make out with him, but you know he's a great kisser?"
"Don't concern yourself with it." Orlando paid for his beer and got up from the bar. "And Lij?"
"Yeah?"
"Grow up, mate."
Good 'un, matey. I always love Domorli!