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for Birth Marks

by dwiliwilight

person Jicky
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
think i cried the first time i read it, teared up again ytd when i read it for the 3rd time or so LOL but i first saw this on the mpreg archive, n it's nice to see it here too. i liked this story quite a lot.
person c0nfus3d
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww. It was sad that their first girl died. One can never stop grieving but its always great to remember. I really loved the ending though. Perfect it was.
person silverhope
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It is one of the lovliest stories I have read. It so beautifully written that I couldn't help but get drawn into the story. To be able to express the overwhelming sadess that the loss of a baby can cause in the manner which you have done is amazing. I have never read a fanfiction before that evoked such strong emotion from me. Thank you for sharng it with the rest of us. I look forward to reading more of your work.
person Elvenlover
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A touching story and i loved it. So sad and ended so sweet. Very nicely done :D
person Susan
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was so beautiful! I had such a hard time reading it though, what with all the tears. Thank you for such a wonderful story and a perfect ending!
person Ravenx
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. You had me crying for half the story!! I don't know what to say but Great Story. Keep up the good work.
person Mistress Proofread
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The word is spelled

Attacked

Not attacted
person Aggie
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg that was so sad and the ending was so happy....aww i cried!!!! and i'm gonna cry again!!!!!!!!


nice job!!!!!! please write more!!!


Aggie
person cutie_draco84
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story it was beautiful .

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