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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it, so look forward to reading more. Hope you update soon.
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought that was good and very exciting, but it was kind of confusing, all i would fix is too jus clarify things maybe in the end or after u write somethin that would sound confusin to some. k but everything else is awsome. (im such a perv for reading this, hmmm thats a first a female perv ^_^)
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ruin it?! hells no! heh heh, made it better of course! wow, the plot is coagulating nicely! I hope you right another part soon, coz all these weird happenings are getting me wondering more and more! and oh, i forgot to tell you, the snow fight while 'cleaning' was the best! haha, so funny!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Your plot is interesting and your characters are all behaving in character. The setting is interesting too. Great job.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! I really liked it!! The only thing I would want to coment on is it isn't Sensai it's Sensei. Just wanted to help! ^-^ I absouletly LOVE NarutoXSasuke pairings!!! ::claps:: Sugoi! sugoi!!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi! I say this with total sincerity: the chapters seem to be getting better as the story goes along! and I'm not just talking plot wise, you must've taken care to edit this last chapter coz I didn't see any mistakes! anyway, great job and please upload more tersters soon! especially since you left it at such an evil cliffhanger this time!!!! [I think I'm now officially yer loyal fan!! XD]
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! This is finally, ally lly getting interesting! When's the SasuNaru?!!!
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT!!!^_^ I love this story, please write more! I can't wait to see what the hell is going on here:D
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Ja virkelig!" <-- *points at* you norwegian? 8D or possibly swedish? ....you're scandinavian! and a SasuNaru fan!! waho, kewl :p
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Random Kyuubi: I like how you used Northern lights in the second chapter. thats my favorite Shaman King song, next to Braveheart....dammit, now i'm in a Shaman king mood!! *goes off to watch her Shaman King dvds*
Sasuke: When the lemons c i b i better be on top!!
Hao: Your still not over that Naruto seme fic?
Sasuke: *growls* Shaddup!!
Random Kyuubi: Ok, now i'm in a Naruto mooain!ain! * Watches her Naruto dvds instead*
Sora: .......i feel left out!!! *goes off to find Riku*
Random kyuubi: .........Anou...Continue!!!
Sasuke: When the lemons c i b i better be on top!!
Hao: Your still not over that Naruto seme fic?
Sasuke: *growls* Shaddup!!
Random Kyuubi: Ok, now i'm in a Naruto mooain!ain! * Watches her Naruto dvds instead*
Sora: .......i feel left out!!! *goes off to find Riku*
Random kyuubi: .........Anou...Continue!!!