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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KYAA!!! Xlovelove it all!! Excellent job on all the detail and hard work you put into the chapies! The plot is wonderfully solid, and the pairings thus far are gorgeous! *ish a huuuuuuuuuge Hinata and Naruto fan* Please, continue soon! I look forward to it!
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is your first fic in a while?....it's quite good...I like it....probably top ten in Naru/Hina fics I've read....their relationship is sweet and somewhat moving at times....*gives thumbs up*...please, do continue
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Not only is it a Hinata/Naruto, of which there is never enough, but it is wonderfully written. Hinata was so wonderfully done, and Naruto came out like such a sweetheart, it was fantastic! I would love to see more of this, since the pairing needs more representation, and you've done such a wonderful job of writing it. It makes me want to draw Hina/Naru pictures, now.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! are you ever going to update this story? I like it alot ^__^
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey,
I have been all over the net looking for good naruto lemons/fics or w.e. I say say i've never read any naruto fic written so well. Although i must admit that the scarcity of naruto lemons on the net has limited the amount of naruto lemons that i've read. However, as a ardent and passionate fan of Dragonball Z lemon of which has a large net base, I must say this one ranks in my top ten fics I have ever read. I am looking forward to more chapters and will bookmark this page in excitement. Great Work!
I have been all over the net looking for good naruto lemons/fics or w.e. I say say i've never read any naruto fic written so well. Although i must admit that the scarcity of naruto lemons on the net has limited the amount of naruto lemons that i've read. However, as a ardent and passionate fan of Dragonball Z lemon of which has a large net base, I must say this one ranks in my top ten fics I have ever read. I am looking forward to more chapters and will bookmark this page in excitement. Great Work!
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off....YOUVE NEVER WRITEN A LEMON BEFORE!?!?!?!? that was really well done! I read the story on fanfiction first (great story PLEASE UPDATE) i was curious and checked out the NC-17 version, that was awesome! please write more, plus its good too be able to read some non-yoai lol (nothing against yoai but there is ALOT of naruto yoai) anywasy pleeeease update soon.
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh ya and PLEEEEEAAAAASSSEEEEE dont let hinata be preganant!(at least not yet) im just tired of lemon storys resorting to that same story line. Cant the the teens get in just a few more rounds of minless sex? please?
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you have some real talent for writing this is a good story. And damn it's been a few months, don't disappoint us update!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE YOU HURTFUL-TAKES-TOO-LONG-TO-UPDATE BATARD