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Don't take this the wrong way, but for the first third of this fic I completely forgot who you were writing about. *L* For some reason, I was reading it with Ichigo and Ishida from Bleach in mind, though the characterization didn't seem quite right. Then I hit the word "kunai" and I was so startled I had to go reread the last few paragraphs. *L*

Interesting style. You really get across just how startled and confused, yet accepting, Sasuke is. Very well described; I can picture it happening just like that. ^_^

Wow...I must say I chuckled a little at the title...and I haven't been with much hope lately at a lot of the crap people have been sudmitting on this site...but this was fucking awesome. Relatively in character, very well written, and with something very original. A lot of the ways you described things, their movements, Naruto's initiation of everything and Sasuke's reaction, the way they both came, were all a bit different from the usual cliche yaoi lemons and I was most impressed and relieved to read something like this. Absolutely wonderful and completely hot. Fantastic job! Keep it up. I really enjoyed this. Well done.

Christ. You have just been elevated to the position of my favorite net-author EVER! Read one of your other stories too and you rock my face off. *cries in hopeless adoration* I am building you a shrine. I swear. I guess you prolly have heard this a thousand times (maybe it even gets old) but you are an awesome writer.

WOW.....that's all I can say....WOW

Wow that was so good!!! Your so talented , I'm jelous! lol Write more stories like this , I love it!!

this was absolutely fantastic.

I adore this. <3

I've read quite a few of your fics by now, and they're all wonderfully written. I don't use this word often, but the way you write the characters is beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

That was really good, though I found Naruto's actions and reactions unexpected. I like!

awwwwww this is so sweet and i love it ^.^