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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person Shez
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great chapter. =D Gotta love Naru-chan's little slutty problem. X3 Hey, quick question: will any of the characters ever regain their memories from when they were ninjas?
person dragonkitty
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHhhh what a great update...jealousy, anger, and wet dreams. Also people that are LOUD during said dreams LoL. I loved it. Oh yea and Yay Gaara!! I love him.
person Kia
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy oh boy... this is getting REALLY good... And what else can I say? This story is great and I love it!

:P

KR
person FeatheredEdge
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH, to gto got caught! hahahaha! great chapter! and about the ooc, I just assumed you were trying to make the characters a little different, coz I didn't think this story would work so well otherwise! XD great job, I really do like how you write them! more please!
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::dances:: wooot! and update and a great one! Excellent job on this chapter. I love that song. It's vgoodgood ^_^ ::stares at her DVD and sighs... wishing she didn't have to go to class now:: Damn you. It'll be stuck in my head all day. ^_^ Loved the chapter. Favorite part was when Neji didn't even look up from his book and was just like "I'm gay." ::dies laughing:: That has to be the greatest line ever! Great job! Update soon! Can't wait!!!!
person KARINA
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well you welcome. ^_^ I don't mind reviewing, especially when it is for a great fic such as yours isaughaughty Naruto! ^_^ Having wet dreams of somebody that he just met. Naughty boy. But I like that. ^_^ If you haven't notice I'm soooo happy!! Wanna know why? Well because you put chapter 7 thats why.
Now, you wanna know how you can make me happier? U just have to put the next chapter on as soon as U can. I'm gonna be in heaven! ^_^
Oh, question time, YEAH! Well, is Sasuke jelouse because Naruto was dreaming of Gaara? Or he doesn't fell anything right now for Naruto (which I thinh I'm wrong)?
Well till next chapter and next update.
As always I just have to say this (clears voice) I LOVE THIS FIC!! ^_^
person Kashshaptu
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke just HAD to com in right? :D hehe, I'm totaly hooked on your story, and when I saw it was updated I squeeled ^_^ well, keep on writing and thx for the yaoi cookie!^_^
person Vampia Zee
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Sasuke should just throw Naruto down and have his way with him just to say "Hey, your mine and nobody else damnit!" >D erorryorry ....and then Naruto ends up sexing with other people cuz he is so slutty xDDD ....er i said i would shut up and i went on er anyway i slapped myself when i saw you had a new chappie up o.o;; *comes back every day to check*

Dallas you say? I'm going to Dallas in...i think June...yea June for A-kon! It would be wicked cool if you was gonna be there xDD i would most likely spaz glomp you then die xD mMmMmMm More Yaoi cookies >D *munches*
person Rune
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
phwheheh! i knew that song! yay! ^-^ i liked the music for that movie! kekekeke XD nyui i thought neji and i thought sasuke but it turned out to be Gaara!
Wow im just gonna get a new pairing here ne? Naru-chan you are a lil slut =P Now we have kittie Naru with Sasuke *drool* i like that concept very much! tehehhee
And of course Gaara needs his sand! it makes everything kinkier! ^______________________^ kinky is always good! yummie playing! jealous sasuke! *glomps him* tehehehehee i wuv you! cant wait for more! *cheer cheer cheer*
person Yuka
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 7 review, cause they don't tell you o.o;)

^^ Wahh, great chapter. XD Sasuke was watching Naruto~ fwahaha. >> Sasuke's such a jealous biatch. x3 Poor thing probably wishes he really was with Naruto... *sighs* Stupid fangirls... XD But I guess it's because of them that they're "together"... hm... *shrug*

Neji: "I'm Gay" XD That was great! I love you. XD

MARRY MEEEEEeeeeeeeee!!! O_O;; *dies* XD Write more soon! <3

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