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person brother of the gods
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Devon Rehab
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story, realy loved it! I have to say Naruto/Hinata is the best Naruto paring.
person dragonflyelj
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that story packed alot of whallop! a wide range of emotions, and you managed to do it in one chapter. Really all in all this was a really good story, I will be checking to see if you have more stories posted.
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person bookeater
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have only one thing to say: thank you! I'm a Naru/Hina fan to and I starting to think that everbody have forgoten about hinata. Cut it out with Naru/Saku crap! And all the others authors who do Naru/Hina take age to update their story! So I hope you will update really soon use use I think your story is great and you can go for at least 15 chapters with a good start like that. I like long story with detail like you do and also some action beteween Naruto and Hinata ^_^( a lot of fluff and adult action) . And just one comment: Even if Hinata begin to change you should let her still a littel shy in the way she speak. I mean when she's lost for word like : hum... ano Na..Na..Naruto-kun. See ya. Up date soon( please I dont have any story to read la and and I becoming crasy)
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! to the end! And great job on the whole story. Very emotional. While I love SasuNaru, I adore NaruHina. Very cute ^_^
person ???
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *Applauds* That was wonderful! I really enjoyed your story! Please tell me this isn't a one-shot, because I wanna see more, what might happen next! I gotta know!

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