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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Veerrrry nicely done. I particularly enjoyed the part where she asks him to talk dirt You You should look into writing another part to this with even more action-packed ninja sex!
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a great fic...enjoyed reading it.
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. There aren't enough of this pairing, there aren't even very many one-shots. Could you do me a favor? *puppy eyes* could you please write a gaara/sakura fic? pretty please? There's even less of those. Thanx!
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Steamy! ^^ I loved it. I hope you write more fics soon!
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, of course I liked it, SasuSaku rules! XD If I had to give any criticism...maybe a little more sensical introduction? And I find that it's missing a certain type of detail...like, it's important to describe more than just specific actions, but smaller details...that wasn't explained well. but I did think it was good overall.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great lemon! It's true that there isn't much fanfiction out there for Sakura/Sasuke fans, but I'm really glad that you are one of them.
I don't know why people often dislike the pairing so much, I think they look really cute together. *sigh* I wish I could write like you or at least have enough of a mind
to write a fanfiction or lemon of the pairing, but all my brain contains is sqat....
*sigh*
I don't know why people often dislike the pairing so much, I think they look really cute together. *sigh* I wish I could write like you or at least have enough of a mind
to write a fanfiction or lemon of the pairing, but all my brain contains is sqat....
*sigh*
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic, but one thing I don't completely understand: how did Sakura loose her bikini top? cause she turned around and it wasn't there anymore, I couldn't really find a reason why it wasn't, but this is totaly not a flame, just one tiny thing I noticed. I love the lemon part ^_^ good job!^_^
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I like the hentai side of you. ^_^ That was a really great SasuSaku lemon. Very sexy and hot. *fans herself* Any chance of writing another lemon of this couple? I do so adore them. *continues fanning herself*