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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two thoughts: Funny idea, but christ spell check. it's hao reo read this way.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On further inspection I can just add to the forgotten endings of words, it's a remarkable, and incredibly original idea. Keep writing, i'm hooked.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well this fic needs to be beta-ed bad there are so many errors and it seems to be written in broken esh. sh. it think it d bed be a decent fic if the errors were corrected
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you're back. =^^= I was starting to wonder if you would continue this fic, so, I'm glad you did. :3
"OH MY GOD, Sasuke is crying, someone get me a camera!"
Omg, that one was absolutely killing me. Way to go, Itachi. xD
And Squee~! KakaIru! Me wuvs. ^^ I wish there will be KakaIru-lemony at some point of this story. But please, keep writing. It's a wonderful and personal fic, so I'd really like to read a much more of this. ^_^
"OH MY GOD, Sasuke is crying, someone get me a camera!"
Omg, that one was absolutely killing me. Way to go, Itachi. xD
And Squee~! KakaIru! Me wuvs. ^^ I wish there will be KakaIru-lemony at some point of this story. But please, keep writing. It's a wonderful and personal fic, so I'd really like to read a much more of this. ^_^
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have officially made this fanfic mega addictive. Therefore, you need to take responsibilty and write more! xD;;; Jokes, jokes. But great chapter. ^^
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SOOOO KYOOOOOOT!
lol and hott too! *yummm*
i hope for a new chappie soon!
^__________^ reallie hott ficcie i luve it
not enough such stuff! and i love teh sex kitten part!
*hugs dance ENCOURAGE*
yyayayayay!
lol and hott too! *yummm*
i hope for a new chappie soon!
^__________^ reallie hott ficcie i luve it
not enough such stuff! and i love teh sex kitten part!
*hugs dance ENCOURAGE*
yyayayayay!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guess who!! xD
Oh, well, I can't say anything more than the last time - it's just a wonderful fic. ^^ Yep, I'll read and try to review as long as I remember. But I really think I won't forget this one anytime soon.^~
I hope there will be some hot and steamy KakaIru, too. ;P
WHAT CAN I SAY? I can't say anything smart today, sorry. _ _ But please, keep writing! ^______________^
I'll be writing my own Naruot fanfiction soon, I hope that when I get it done, you'd read it, too. ^~
Well that's it for this time. ^^
-Majo-chan
Oh, well, I can't say anything more than the last time - it's just a wonderful fic. ^^ Yep, I'll read and try to review as long as I remember. But I really think I won't forget this one anytime soon.^~
I hope there will be some hot and steamy KakaIru, too. ;P
WHAT CAN I SAY? I can't say anything smart today, sorry. _ _ But please, keep writing! ^______________^
I'll be writing my own Naruot fanfiction soon, I hope that when I get it done, you'd read it, too. ^~
Well that's it for this time. ^^
-Majo-chan
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHHH!!!MUST REVIEW TO GET ANOTHER CHAPPIE!!!I'M REVIEWING AS MUSH AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!>___< By the way how is the NejiSasu gonna work O__o??Also who's gonna end up with Naruto in the end?I hope you update soon again^___^Awesome lime/lemon ^______^ Hehehehehe *thinks perverted thoughts about NAruto and Sasuke together in a bed with no clothes on* Hehehehehehe..........
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!its so awsome cant wait for the next chapter ^_~
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gives out a yaoi sticker* Awesome fic! Playboy sasuke... so perfect. xD Continue soon! Pretty please? With a cherry on top? And chocolate sauce? And sprinkles? And a topless Sasuke? xD