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by Aleya

person Grandma18
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is sort of twisted but still is a pretty good story. I want to know what happens next. Please don't abandon this story. Update soon!
person thunder sister
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Awesome!Please update! Please update! I beg you! On bending knee! >.<
person Pastel
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope that Neji does end up with Hinata. Update soon please.
person Kira-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know... I really like the Neji x Hinata pairings. I was a tad wary at first, since they are cousins, but then I thought, "Aw, what the hell?" and have read about 10 different fics with them as the main couple in the past two hours. Now I hearteth them vair vair much.

Yes yes. I am a sad little duckie.

Anyways. That was rambling.

I really like the way you set up their relationship, especially how it seemed she might end up with Naruto, and how Neji was just jealous and nothing more. I also thought the scene when she confessed her love to him was _adorable_.

That being said, I can't wait until I get to read more of this. Yipee. So, best of luck<3.
person Tessa99999
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I was losing hope at finding a good Neji/Hinata fic. I was reading Naruto manga when it struck me that I'd really like to see a relationship develop between Hinata and Neji. This is great. Thanks so much. Nicely written as well. There are some rough parts, but I still look forward to your updates!
person Kaori
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* WOW! I don't even like Aoshi/Misao because i felt it was weird, but for some reason I LIKE YOUR STORY! ^_^ you write very well and i kind of like Neji like this. Weird huh? Anyway, i've always liked Hinata's character, i find the other females in Naruto annoying, especially Sakura so i've only read fics with Hinata in them. I like Neji too and have always been slightly fascinated by a relationship between him and Hina. Sure they're cousins but in Europe a long time ago it was acceptable for cousins to marry each other to keep the wealth and bloodlione pure. ^_^

All i have to say is awesome job and can't wait to read more! Good luck!
KEEP ON WRITING!
person Cookie6
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH, I love it. I didn't get to review for so long. Damn school. I hope you continue soon. I'm dying for the next chapter.
person silvia
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*_* update soon!!!! I love this story!!!!
person Chelsey
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww they should just run away together. That would solve it all! Nice chapter, update soon.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Azure
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! ^^ I'm glad that you're updating sooner. Keep writing, this is a great story.

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