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its so cool and you being a girl and writing this doesn't bother me i love you writing and your good at writing these things

I want MORE!! MOREMOREMORE! Cause, I love reading about Jiraiya doing gay things. XD It is very hawt. Please write more?

First of all Ihave to tell u that this fiction shocked me, really shocked me.I'm Jiraiya u k u know?So I never have an idea about his behavior like in this fiction OMG how he become so pervert with his student,Naruto.But I like ur story so please update it soon .
Maybe u can mail 2 me . I'll glad 2 talk with u.

Ew! Jiraiya really is a super pervert.
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Write more eheheh
Rikona is a super pervert too ^_^

I *so* love this fic!!!!!!!!!!! what a good idea!!!! I once dreamed of having sex with my step-dad. and it was hot steamy sex!!! I avoided him since then and still do. I get mad at him for apperantly no reasons..... but I always feel this anger well up inside me when I see that digusting little...... Anyway, I think I understand Naruto REALLY good ^.~. I don't know how you add story's to yr favourite's here so I will just check in some days k? please update soon!

I am Jiraiya-sama's biggest fan and i've been waiting for something just like this in a fan fic. Reallhavehave. You set us up well in the first chapter and I'm excited to read the next chapter.

cdk

YAY SUPER PERVERT! MUST READ MORE!!!!

this is going well, fast update too... can't wait until the juicy bits :P

Poor Naruto! That was rather disturbing for him. But he better get used to it, ne? :P Can't wait to see what he's going to do, when they're gonna get sleep! *snickers*

Ooooh... this is getting better and better. I'll be dropping my reviews here, coz I prefer reading
the non-censored edition ;) (Shinka: the Cho-Hentai?).
You actually have a really good writing style, narrative but still easy to read and not boring.
Oh, and I read the flame you got on ff.net. As we can deduce from the covers of our favorite
Ero-Sennin's books, the audience are strictly heterosexual men. Right. Who knows, maybe the
lady on the front page's really a transexual. Or just a guy who likes to dress in drag XD.
And yep, I checked, it's 'chou' [pron.: 'cho']. But I don't think it's worth changing the title or anything.
The idea of having more Jiraiya/Naruto fics around is (mouth-watering) appealing, so feed the
plot bunnies!

Shin--

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