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by purrfectly679

person ureihitomi
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, i can't wait!!!!! but i'm gonna have to!!!! wow, simply amazing. you're really good!!!!! this is going to drive me crazy.
person kenshinjunkie
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story kicks ass! it's sooooooooooooo good. please, keep updating. i love this story. and it starting to get REAL good.


a fan,
kenshinjunkie
person ureihitomi
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gaspss..... can't wait for the rest!!!! you have me on the edge of my seat. ^_^ poor hinata and poor naruto. what will angry sasuke do.........

keep up the good work, gives thumbs up like gaisensei. ^_^
person Hikari Aya
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
........That was...AMAZING! Me want more! More! More! More! SOON!!
anat tat the hell do you mean your first fic or whatever? Beautiful lemon and story!
Really long too *drools* hehe \/.\/"

Onegai! Update SOON! ^__^;;

Ja ne!
person ureihitomi
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg, i am soo enjoying your fic. every chapter so far has kept me greatly entertained. just wanted to let know. ^_^
person Dor
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! its so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0oo awsome!!!! man!!! last line is a killer! You go but he stays !!! ohh man whats gonna happen!! hurry update i wann aknow!!!
person Van Luver
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! continue!! and you did awsome with this chappy!
person Van LuVer
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mailing list?!?! what mailing list?!?! i want it!!!! send it to me!!! cool cool oh and i just wanted to revied for chapter 10.. wel the lemon one and say that
IT KIK ASS!!! omg best lemon i have read!!! so awsome man!!! its beautiful!!! i swear a work of art! how long did it take for u to write it?!?!?! MAN YOU ARE AWSOME!! THAT WAS AWSOME!! love it!
person chiriku
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Meeppp!! you are amazing!! I can't wfor for the next chapter!!! This fic is sooo great!!! XD
person dark_orion
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For someone who's never written a lemon before, you seem to have a nartural talent for it. That is one of the best damn lemons I've ever read. Keep going! This is a fantastic story!

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