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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... First off, I must say that I absolutely loved the descriptions in this story! As one of the other reviewers mentioned, it sounds like a porn flick. It was hot. WAY hot! I also liked how you avoided name/descriptive blanks, that's very tricky to do. The 2nd-person format made me very happy too. It's good to see that reader-insert writers are everywhere.
Although I loved this story, I do wish there was some dialogue (even if it was only "FASTER!" or something). This story makes a great PWP, but I wouldn't mind a hint of back story. It'd be nice to know how the "you" character knows Kakashi.
Although I loved this story, I do wish there was some dialogue (even if it was only "FASTER!" or something). This story makes a great PWP, but I wouldn't mind a hint of back story. It'd be nice to know how the "you" character knows Kakashi.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story love the way you made the point of view
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Must have more chapters.....-twitch-
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anaconda? When I read that it made me giggle. The story could have used a lot more background detail...why was the reader at the waterfall. How did they know who Kakashi was. And do they have a relationship. I've read some really really good fics involving the reader as the main character and the difference between this one and those was detail detail detail. But all in all I did enjoy the fic. Write more! I love Kakashi! Maybe you can add another character to the mix and get a sweet threesome. But its just a suggestion.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you write one like this one only with Iruka insted <3
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that story rocks! i love kakashi.. keep up the good work!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>sighs< kakashi is so aloof, how good looking am I to catch his eye? He ought to be spewing blood from his nose when he catches sight of me! Yummy! I loved it
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great and all, but the only thing that I didn't like was that it was like a porn movie with all of the, uh, extremely pornographic words you used. Still great, though. XD
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*imagining this w/ me and Kakashi* *ahem* uhh... *blush* this is awesome, and its awesome...it reminds of the lemon song by led zepplin or you shook me all night long by ACDC or various Kinks songs.... i like it, it deserves a 5 stars! (a?) *****
ciao!
"I'm gonna leave my children...down on this killing floor."
Noberu-sama
ciao!
"I'm gonna leave my children...down on this killing floor."
Noberu-sama
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thoughr this story was really well written except for the few grammer errors. ^_^