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Woa I find this story very interesting! Please continue... I like Temari a lot and sometimes in my devious thoughts I had plotted incest fics ^^ Yours is getting more and more interesting, good work!

Yo! Love yer story , btw, before I get to the volunteering part. Excellently done. Anyway. I prolly wouldnt be much as a beta, but I do know the anime pretty well (If all else fails, I have access to the manga up to the point of the stealing of the KazeKage ) Dunno if that would help, but eh. Offers there. Keep up the great work!

Much luv,
Natakamani

Great story. I like Temari in how she fighting her feelings for her brother. The Gaara character seems to be growing a side of affection that only you can create. Come up with a new one soon

this is pretty cool :! i know it's bad, but i rather like this couple. they're fictional so it's okay!! lol

wow changing a whole plot over a few comments shows dedication. xD i just hope that you feel content with however it turns out, despite comments <3

i rather like your writing style, it's unique in it's own way. and making sasuke the bad guy!! hahaha. it's fitting.

great so far, carry on!! >3 -pervertlaugh-

way! you updated :) These plot twists are making my head spin around >_< Oh well, I'll be waiting for more

I got a bit confused at first when you were talking about how Sasuke had transformed into Gaara, but the rest of it was wonderful! It took you forever to update, and I have been looking forward to it for awhile! You should make the chapters longer...^^; I love what you have done already!

Yeah, I was thinking that he was getting a smidge OOC too. Nice save! :D

Much love, and I am looking forward to the next update!

-Mitsu

GAAH! That's cruel of you! You made it seem like it was Gaara being so sweet in the last chapter, and then it turns out to be SASUKE! *fumes* Why doesn't he just, jump off a cliff or something?! *takes a deep breath*

Sorry about the ranting...it's just been so long since you updated, and you ended it with a cliffhanger! That's truly evil of you. ^_^ And about your characterization...I guess that depends on the reader. I personally don't like the idea of a Sadist-Gaara mixed with rape, so I thought he was pretty much in character throughout the fic. HOWEVER, if people ARE into rapish Gaara, then I guess he seemed a little OOC.

But it's up to you how he turns out! Anyway, I really, really hope you update soon! I'll feel sorry for Temari in the mean while. -_-;; UPDATE SOON!

I have never found a garra and tamara story,looks like i still haven't.I doubt tamari would guard the
uchiha.

oh you updated :) Good fic, with every chapter, I like it more ;) Temari and Sasuke had a fight? Well, we'll hear more about that in future, right? Keep on writing

You're writing skills are fascinating. Gaara has been kept in character up to until your last update.( I rarely see anyone surpass that.) I admire this fanfic. Please, write more. :D