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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...more...More...MORE...
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You need to earn that NC-17 rating you gave your fic buddy. Turn things up a notch. *wink wink*
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept. You have a love affair with commas I suggest you try to make that less obvious. As with all new authors I strongly suggest you find a beta reader to fine tune your story and make you less eligible for flames. If you need help just ask.
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks!I'll try to improve.