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by caro8

schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this fic far too much.... But it is still good as the first time. You seem to berate yourself for incompotence when in truth i see none. Good job and keep up the good work. Please update soon.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon don't let it die
person Nameramthgin
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, first and foremost I must say that so far this is an excellent story. I am alsp very sorry for your loss. Losing a loved one is never easy to cope with, but it is important to keep moving forward with your life, for yourself and your family. I hope everthing works out well for you and your family. If you need help with beta reading I would be glad to assist you. I can be reached at Nameramthgin@hotmail.com.
All the best regards,
---Namer
person ....
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon plllllleeeeeasssssse
person Vally
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This ish a good story... When's the naruhina lemon coming?
person Josh B
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love your story is a great read... But I hope you get time to update this story and keep on going with the story til it is finished but.... I hope you get the time to keep up with the writing when you have time... JTB8834@aol.com
person Dar
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well ive gotta say i like the whole story so far just sat here for hours and read all you have posted and ive got to say i look forward to seeing more in the future.
person Draconayzia
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting read. I like all the little twists that make you pay attention to what's actually going on.
person Dionne
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far! The pacing is great and everything!
person Unnamed
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey i just finish reading all you have written so far (21 chapters) and i'd just like to sat you are very talented writer and u should get the next chapter out as soon as possibul =)

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