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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eh? Was some part missing? O_O
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it
but there is nothing in here to rate it on adult fanfiction
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but there is nothing in here to rate it on adult fanfiction
no action
sorry
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seems pretty realistic to me.Made my guts feel all funny and that is a good thing.Vivid.
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is different than when I first read it. Is it a glitch or what? I prefered the fist verision. The doujinshi on devient art follows what I remember the fic to be. Great art by the way. Kudo's to who every drew that. If it is a glitch can you fix it. Or Can you e-mail me a copy of the fist version. Thanx. I really like this fic, your friend has really kept them in character. I can so see it happening. (At least the first part, the rest was kinda sappy.)
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD I like this!!! Very nice! Both the beta and real author should be proud, yah! (quite a bit of cursing, though...)
Anywho, it's really nice, and I can't wait to see the finished Doujinshi!
Anywho, it's really nice, and I can't wait to see the finished Doujinshi!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cuuuuuute! I'd love to see a sequel with them going to the ramen place half-naked. Especially if it included Sasuke sitting on Naruto's lap and snogging him, just as Sakura and some of the other Sasuke-mad girls show up for food. Anyways, cute fic. *^_^* And I think you did a good beta-ing. Nothing seemed glaringly obvious anyways.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w^! i^! i haven't read something this cute in a long time! well, there were some doujinshi that shiro-san drew, but there were pictures and so it doesn't count as a fanfic so^____^
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I loved this. Definatly in my top 10 faves. =3 They were both so friggin IN character, I was relaly amazing. And I adored naruto, he was just too much. XD It'd be great to see more of your friend's works! I hope they post again. =3
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic, but not nc-17 you might wanna tell your friend that.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will there be more of this????? *hopeful thinking* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!