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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't help myself, I'm desperately drowling in front of my computer.
What will be of Sasuke and Naruto now?
Will there ever be a second chapter? I would like that so much!
Thank you for this great drowling time.
What will be of Sasuke and Naruto now?
Will there ever be a second chapter? I would like that so much!
Thank you for this great drowling time.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I just wanted to drop you a little note telling you that I found your ability to capture erotica very impressive. So if this is your first time, I feel that you will only improve with practice, and really I can't wait to see more.
Stop saying you're awful, lmao. I read this a few times, in fact. And to boot, this may be only the third or fourth review I've taken the time to write up! Don't stop, it's very very *very* nice..! (Maybe someday I'll get up the guts to write too, lol.)
~<3 Typhoon Jax <3~
I just wanted to drop you a little note telling you that I found your ability to capture erotica very impressive. So if this is your first time, I feel that you will only improve with practice, and really I can't wait to see more.
Stop saying you're awful, lmao. I read this a few times, in fact. And to boot, this may be only the third or fourth review I've taken the time to write up! Don't stop, it's very very *very* nice..! (Maybe someday I'll get up the guts to write too, lol.)
~<3 Typhoon Jax <3~
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is really interesting in a perverted nice way. heheh (no offense intended ^^) keep up the story! update soon! PLEASE!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was good you are a good writer and for one of your first sex scene it was good
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh loved it. XD Very very yummy yummy. :D
Please write more chapters, it doesnt suck! Tis GREAT. =3
Please write more chapters, it doesnt suck! Tis GREAT. =3
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...wow.
just, wow.
I, for one, would die for a next part. It was like, the perfect smut if you ask me. ^^
just, wow.
I, for one, would die for a next part. It was like, the perfect smut if you ask me. ^^
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! that was so hot!!! sizzling. hoee~~~ please write more? please please?
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fics on the site.Of course you should write more,lots more!
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was so good
i hope you update
i hope you update