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for Betrayed

by Klepto

person Mazu
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(sniff) so sad (sniff) (sniff)
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O ... damn. I don't know what to say... I wish you'd expand... or... write an actual story out of that... but... I have a feeling you won't. That was wonderfully poetic though. A little over-dramatic considering it's Stoic Sasuke's PoV.. but hey... love does crazy things to people.
person Emily Saeke
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww....poor poooooooooor Sasuke!!!!! Now keep writing please, ish very good so far yesh!
person Cacique
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! that's one ive never read before... i like though, very unexpected. i love your Naruto drabbles! you should do a series of them... like themed or something...yah well keep writing!
person Van
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!!!!!! I never read a story with the teacher and Naruto !!!!!! Make that bastard jelous!!! PLease this story is wicked!!!
person hogo-chan
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! please promise me this isnt a one-shot!!! poor sasuke!!! nooooooooooo! please update!!!
person lillilly
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but how did this happen? Are sasu and naru really together? How did it come that iruka and naru are together like this? I hope you dont stop here, there is so much left hanging!
person FreaK
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAI XD~

way to short! make ~moooooooore~ ._. *sniff*
person Hitomi
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good for a four in the morning drabble.
^.~
person Yum
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh bizare.. It seems to me nearly impossible for Naruto to betray someone in his right state of mind...but like someone had said impossible is not english so...
I think It's too short you must continue with longer chapters!!^^ pretty please because I really like this short chapter? oneshot? how call it? nevermind just know that it was good!!^^

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