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for Take My Pain Away

by CandyElly

person campurr
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic,restrained,it just gets better.I relly like kak. pov
chris
person campurr
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think using the shar.like that was really moving.I reall ylike their exchanges.I think I am ,,,ohh too private.Please continue.
chris
person fairia13
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story and I love the way you managed to make is limey, but you also preserved her innocence in the literal sense. I can't wait to see what happens in the morning, please update soon!
person razielslittleflamekaat
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow *gapes in awe at the pretty story* Nicely done. Please update the soonest cause I loved this story very much!
person Rockie
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Auuuuugh, the tension...the suspense...
I really like this so far. You do a good job of keeping everyone in character.
person Wist Star
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow i luved that cute inocent love between sakura and kakashi!! its so wonderful. i just cant get enough of ur story!!!!!! please continue its so wonderful and sweet!
person Wist Tar
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow again!!
Luved it and the whole looking for sasuke in a trouble part of the city with the peachstreet name it was so cinvinsing of sakura when she drank the sctch on rocks XD!
keep writting mroe cuz ur stories r gettign good and interesting!!!
person dAni3Lr
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter ^^ it freaks me out though, that peachtree st. u're talking abt. Sakura sure has turned more beautiful in the way u wrote her to be! Pls continue ^^
person Feleda
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome and well written! Please keep writing. Do you happen to have an e-mail update list by chance? If so, possibly add me? I'm really enjoying how well written this is, and I'd love to read more! ^_^
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo So good! I can't wait for more!

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