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for Bloody Sheets

by emmel

person Chelsey
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I was written well but, WTF?!?!?!?!?! Too bad there won't be a happy ending. I hope you update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA:HisBeautiful
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Very good! I very much enjoyed this! You have a way with words, and good use of metaphor.
person Hajime
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're way of storytelling was very interesting, and to think you only sat down and started typing. I like your style. It gave me a shock when I came to the ending. Well done.
person kayoko
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm...i'd have to say that i didnt like the ending..I liked the beginning, I loved the middle...didn't like the end

i guess it's because the change from cruel itachi to waffy was too abrupt (?)

it took me a while to sort out what was going on in the end

i guess those would be the reasons why i didn't like the ending.

i loved the part where itachi pretended to be sasuke..that was very..wow...*laughs*...i can't believe sakura didn't know..-____-

thank you for writing!~

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