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by mehmeh

person Rachael
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hoorah! I did think perhaps this had become an abandoned story. I think my heart spasmed whne I saw the update when I was browsing. It's bizarre, but in a way, Naruto seems to be maintaining his innocence, like with the part how he looks guilty when Sasuke exclaims "You talk to it!" and how Naruto babbled afterward trying to explain. I really don't know if I see Sasuke saying "you monster." I doesn't fit for me, though the whole transformation thing is looking very very interesting. This story has haunted the backs of my mind since i read it for the first time in November 2005. Please write more soon!
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bites nails* @_@ eek!
*growls* how could sasuke-teme call Naru-chan a monster!?! that wasn't very nice!
Yeah... I love your story! I can't wait to read s'more!!!!!!
person m
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bites nails* @_@ eek!
*growls* how could sasuke-teme call Naru-chan a monster!?! that wasn't very nice!
Yeah... I love your story! I can't wait to read s'more!!!!!!
person medicninM
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bites nails* @_@ eek!
*growls* how could sasuke-teme call Naru-chan a monster!?! that wasn't very nice!
Yeah... I love your story! I can't wait to read s'more!!!!!!
person Cindyip
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a little short this chapter. But I luv it;)
person ki-ka
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0-0 Sasuke-teme you did it now, you when and broke Naru-kuns heart....hey hey Naru-kun show Sasuke-chan just how much you love him in pain...after all that ice icicle that shoved up his ass has to though out some day....AmuseMe i wish you the best on the next chappie the storie so far..^^__^^ love love ...please get Sasuke-teme back for Naru-kun...teme is in need of a world of hurt...O_~
person hogo-chan
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops* ...How could you just leave it like that?! *makes random noises of frustration* damn it... now I have to wait for the next update which could take foreveeeeeeeeer! (at least, forever to me! ^_^) please update fast! Your story is just too good!
person Sas-uke
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm. Teh seckseh.
person Vox
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O. My. God. I SPY AN UPDATE! A FREAKIN' UPDATE! YAHOO!
Hm, now that I'm done freaking out, I just wanted to say that I liked the citrus. Sexy... Oh, and is Naruto really gonna tell him about Kyuubi? Ah, I wonder what Sasuke will do... Anyway, thank you very much for the unexpected but most welcome update.
Ja ne!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*manages to finally pull herself back together atfter reading the last chapter and takes a deep breath* holy crap! you're alive! i've been checking faithfully for updates who-knows-how-long (because you left us with such an evil cliffy) only to see a lemon that takes up the whole freakin chapter! and do you know what i have to say about that? ...........YOU ARE A GOD!! thank you! thank you! thank you so much for coming back!!! *gives you zebra cakes* that lemon was freaking hawt! it was HAWT, i say! you have no idea how much i missed this fic. sure there are other dark & angsty sasunaru stories out there but none quite like this one. now if only you can bring in some lovely kyuubi-ness in the next chapter. you know how much i love your kyuubi-san. everything about this chapter was great. it was descriptive, the perfect length and sasuke was a freakin' trip. ( i must've said freakin' like four times now) naruto, so, had his ass right where he wanted him... or shoud i be saying that the other way around? *snickers* i will definitely be here for the next update. so until then, stay safe and keep up the exceptional work!

~Devious Lil Devil

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