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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cracked up when Sasuke said he had learned that taijutsu pin from Kakashi...I suspect it really isn't a ninja move at all XD! Other than that I'm a little shocked at how fast the boys are moving...(not necessarily a bad thing *cough*) I liked it a lot! And I adore Gaara so that's always a plus, hehehe. The lemon was nicely written....very hot ^^ So glad you updated! I'm looking forward to finding out what happens with Temari and the prospective husbands hahaha...
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo. shoo good!!!!!!
it was kinda funny whe jiraiya coughs. its seemed like he was being sarcastic. lol. haha
wow and the"lemon kinda" ish was really good. especially 4 ur first time. really good!
hehe poor Tsunade. haha XD
cant wait 4 ch 7! woohoo. XD
it was kinda funny whe jiraiya coughs. its seemed like he was being sarcastic. lol. haha
wow and the"lemon kinda" ish was really good. especially 4 ur first time. really good!
hehe poor Tsunade. haha XD
cant wait 4 ch 7! woohoo. XD
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Wow. Awesome chapter. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute...hope you update soon. Love your story so far...maybe you can have a triangle between Gaara/Naruto/Sasuke? Because what you've written so far doesn't exactly say that Naruto likes Sasuke...
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter!! please update soon!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(major nosebled) whoaaaaa....
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first lemon hmm? very well written ^.~ hope there'll be more to enjoy
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD MYA! this is my favorite fic ever XD Nya! i love it... update soon please XD XD
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! Is Gaara refering to Naruto? If so, what is their relationship? Could there maybe be a love triangle? Love triangles are soo yummy!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... Dude, I love how you write o_O For your first lemon, I have GOT to congragulate ya :D The descriptions seemed so perfect! It was fluent and sexy ~__~ <3 Anyways, the plot seems to be getting reeeally interesting as well ;D I wonder who Gaara could be talking about e_e <3