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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you're making it go to fast...the character's are a bit OOC (Naruto and Sasuke anyway...). But other than that it's good!I love it! Please update!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!! its so good!!! you have to write more!!!!i love them toghter!!so please keep writing!!!!one of the best short story i've read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, when i read the summary, i thought to myself.. "hmm, sounds a bit corny but maybe i'm in the mood for that" :p but now, after reading it, i think it's actually a really good story, everyone's in character, and the plot is getting more and more interesting! i can't wait for the next chapter! i hope you have it soon ^__^
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this is new...
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im disappointed that it took you this long to update, you see, this was one of my most favorite stories here... anyway, this chapter was good. update soon ok? ^__^
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit. A cliffhanger. I'm really getting interested in this story but the last chapter seemed a bit rushed. Otherwise I love your story and hope that you update it soon. It is hard to find a completed SasuNaru story.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHH! T_T that was sad and depressing to read about Naruto >.> but then it turned happy when Naruto is alive and breathing ^^ and he wasn't dreaming about someone telling him they loved him oh well he'll get a reminder when Sasuke tells him again -.- which we all know will be awhile -.- depressing for Naruto for awhile that is >.> and who did Temari choose?
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cry when you update because it's been so long. xDD
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! I'm so happy you decided to continue it =D I really like this fic ^^
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT please please please UPDATE A S P
THANKS!!!!!!!!
THANKS!!!!!!!!