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Wow...that was really hot. I never knew i could like a Yaoi pairing w/o Kakashi like that

I think that you should definatly do a pequil for this. Like maybe the mission you mentioned, that started it all. This is an excellent one-shot though.Your use of description and subject matter is very good. "Lines" definatly stands well on it's own. Maybe I just think you should write a prequil because "Lines" was so good.^-^ One question though. I know I'm slow and it's probably pretty obvious but who is this "other person" Naruto and Neji were talking about. Hinata? I don't know, I'm only a little ways into the Chuunin Exams. Let me please know.:)

Great job!!

Midori Tachibana ^-^

This is quite possibly my favorite Naruto fanfiction ever. So hot. It's stories like this that make me question SasuNaru as THE pairing and wonder why Neji isn't in everything. I enjoyed it so much, thanks for writing it.

^^ This is wonderfully written!
I love the descriptions so much--
The diction and rhetorical strategies used are fantastic.
Great job!! :clap:
I look forward to more of your writing! It's GREAT!!!
~michi~

This was absolutely inspired! Just what I needed. It's rare to find a truly great Neji/Naru fic, even just a PWP. I'm completely in awe of how well written this piece is. It's amazing! Hot and sexy, yet emotional. I hope you write more, maybe even continuing this storyline/ universe you've created. It seems like there's a history there that you didn't delve into during this fic. Not that I minded. It was hot as hell ^_^ God, this is a good fic. I can't stress how high the quality of your writing is. I absolutely adored it!

That was so nice,the true meaning of the word mind you.Your writing style is smooth, the story was hot and I loved the end.Well done.

Naah, that was yummy. I'm very curious to know who saw (almost saw?) them, but if this fic's a one-shot then it really doesn't matter much. In any case, great fic.

--Ruby

that was amazing! all serious and kinda mean and stuff and then all sweet and junk at the end! awwwwwwww! please dont tell me your going to leave it as a one shot! it was so great! you have to keep going with it! so.... see ya next chapter! ^_~