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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*RUSH* lol
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I just love this pairing so much! Great chapter!
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Kyuubi is great! Hinata is really good! Naruto could stand to be a little goofier, but I really like the way you portrayed him.
There are some repeated spelling and syntax errors. It seems you don't have a beta. I'd be willing to proofread any future chapters
for you.
There are some repeated spelling and syntax errors. It seems you don't have a beta. I'd be willing to proofread any future chapters
for you.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
New chappie, yay ^_^ Neat addition, can't wait for more :)
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this story back. The chapter is a bit short, but the story is still good.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you finally updated! Ironic though that I checked today and miraculous that it was finally updated. This Fanfic is truely one of the best Naruto fanfics out there I believe. You're doing a great job and I hope you continue this fine piece of work. And great job with not rushing it and just letting the idea's come to you ^_^
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, one of the best fics I've seen on this site, unfortunatly said for that, this site does not have many good fan fictions -.-' keep this up, and good work, I like this story.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Onegai!!!!! Update this wonderful story!!!! I love Naruto x Hinata pairing, and this is the first story I've seen for them, so far^^
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excelent story. good plot, character development. not just pointless smut. when will you be updating?
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't worry i don't hate you for it i totally understand this is how the demon act so it's kinnda understandable how you wrote it
you did in deed write this story very well and i can not wait for the next chapter ;)
you did in deed write this story very well and i can not wait for the next chapter ;)