rate_review Reviews

Hey! I don't like Saku/Sasu fics either! But....I really like what you are doing with this so far. I haven't heard all of what you have...but I really like it. I saw the exact translation you saw, too. ^_~ My favorite fansub group ^_^. I love people who keep up with the new stuff. Anyway....I am a Yaoi shipper to boot....but I actually have osme sort of nasty soft spot for this couple (much to the horror of all of my friends) I think Sasuke is beautiful, of course, and terrifically fucked up, and Sakura has grown so much...and is *so* in love with him. They also gives those pretty subtle hints that Sasuke *just might* care about her in return. So. In conclusion, (I'm sorry) I really like this fic, and your writing, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Definitely. Great job so far. If you like Yaoi at all, I wrote a dirty fic called 'Fragrance of Fantasy' in Shikamaru's POV. Check it out if your interested (I'm Eye of Aurora)

Before bidding you a fond farewell....let's all take a moment to lament over Naruto being licensed.....

This world is going to hell. *hugs Naruto bootlegs*

Yahoo! Finally some new chapters! I've been waiting anxiously for these. What a twist! I didn't see that coming. Poor Hinata, Naruto's so ..... Well, I can't actually come up with a word to describe him right now, but that's not the point. Hey! Clueless! That one works! I liked these chapters! ^_~


P.S: Itachi + Sakura + Fanfics = VERY interesting!!!!!

This is a very intresting fic. I don't like Sasuke too much in the manga, always so cold towards Sukura (who obviously loves him) All though, there are a few times where he seems alittle kinder toward her... Anyway, I think this is an intresting idea for a fic and I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awsome work! ^_^

I really hate SasuSaku, but hey, you make it work! Keep writing, and dont turn this to SasuNaru, please.

omg..... this has got to be one of the greatest saku/sasuke fanifcs i hav ever read.... normaly i support gaara/saku but this was great! love it alot! please do update!

oh that was amazing.

I really liked it, it's pretty well written and this couple SO needs more love. (Not as much as Itachi/Sakura fics need but love but still) I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good work dude! Write on!

Heya! Liked the new chapter, I look forward to more, and also 'nudge nudge' the hotel stay. hehe.

ooh, well that makes sense. =] Can't wait to read all of the chapter.

I really like what you have here. I do like the fact that Sasuke is opening up to Sakura, but I am thinking that Sasuke gave in just a little too easily to Sakura's kiss, you could have drug that scene out a bit more, and made him pull away, to dwell on it for awhile, maybe think about how nice it was, albiet shocking, and give in to it in a later chapter. Really play on both character's doubts and thoughts etc and draw out the readers emotions on this. (Do not think I am complaining, I am just offering suggestions. You can take what you like, and leave what you don't.)

You have done an excellent job of keeping Naruto in character, and I can't wait to see the fight that will happen between him and Sasuke. I am not feeling well today, so didn't really pay attention to grammar and such, I was being a bad girl, and only read for the enjoyment factor. (you have permission to whip me with a soggy ramen noodle) So I can't really comment on that for you. Geez, I can't even remember if I saw any spelling errors or anything, well, I suppose that could be a good thing, ne? hehe. Ok, well I will watch for further updates, and I agree with you on the age thing, if I feel that the characters are acting older than they should, I just mentally tack on a few years.