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by dragonflyelj

person Silverwing
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! Poor Kisame, nobody loves him. I'm glad you posted the next chapter, I like where the story is going.

Loophole is an amazing story isn't it? I swear, I'm addicted to it. ^_______________^
person saika
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! The fight with kisame and sakura was hilarious....well the healing session and when Itachi caught them anyways LMAO....
If I was sakura i would have had an extremely hard time keeping the evil laugh silent....but then she would probebly futher disturb them lol ^^
Excellent chapter and i am pleased to hear that chapter 3 would be out soon.
Hail to the Itasaku! Thanks for continuing it! *hugs* ^^
person krickets
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if i recall correctly you had me read this a while ago

your very naughty and im very privleged i know.......

SO THERE!

it was still awesome
person Lilydraken
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, honey! Keep it coming! You inspire me to keep going with mine!
person Himiko-chan
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Konnichiwa! ano, please update ASAP can't wit for your next CHAP! good lines, good plot, what more can a reader ask but another chapter...^_^
Ja ne! ^^
person wynter89
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sakura has fight in her for sure, but it is kind of weird that she could match Itachi in a fight. if she can do that then she could be stronger then Sasuke.

good luck
may kami-sama be with you
person jennjennr
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating, this is a really good story, and i'm so glad your trying to make it realistic (your succeding btw). and i perfectly agree about sakura's strength, i love the fact you made her strong.
person alice
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!why don't you update?
person kimiwoi
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, awesome job! the way you put down each of the character's personality, itachi, kisame, sakura is just good! you also did it in a way that they seemed to be in character! love it, not loved it, LOVE IT!!!! Continue! Please???? XD XD XD I wanna know why Kisame is staring at her like that.

*GREAT JOB! BEYOND GREAT...
person Michi
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I'm so freakin' glad that I finally found a well written Itachi/Sakura fic. Post some more soon please! -Michi

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