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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting *nod nod* I cannot comment much on the story itself, since it's too early to do so, but I will comment that I like Sasuke's thought process and your writing style. Oh and grown-up ANBU Naruto.. sexah! Please do continue, it was an intriguing chapter and I'm also eager to see who exactly the 6th is!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it the captain Naruto's son? I hope it is.
This is very well written and I was drawn in very quickly. Please update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
This is very well written and I was drawn in very quickly. Please update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very intersting. Hmm....I wonder. Could the sixth be Naruto, and the Anbu captain his son? Anyway, enough guessing. Awesome story. I look forward to reading more :D
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start for the fic... Im a lil confused with naruto actually... did his run-in with sasuke before he left affect him in some way??? plz continue cannot wait for next chappy... ^o^
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. This fic has great potential! I love the fact that this new guy is a Naruto-look alike! His son, eh!!! *blushes* KAWAII!!!!!!! lol I love Naruto. Die Sasuke, DIE!!!! ;) Overall, interesting storyline, but do fix some punctuation. It slightly takes away from the fic. I wanna see more of this fic!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By punctuation...there was only one line! lol. ^^; My mistake!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
argh I re-read this. How embarassing for me, the facts and clues didn't click in. Anyways, if that's the case, then ignore what I said in the first review (with exception of the praise)
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waii! Holy crap this is good! Very well written, I didn't even see any spelling errors! Way to go! For once a good story, idea AND GRAMMER! Congratulations, I'll be keeping an eye on this one. ^^ Keep it up.
~Hawk
~Hawk