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by amuckgirl

schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While it's good to see more Ibiki stories, your characterization of him seems a bit off. Which is understandable, since Ibiki is a very difficult character to depict (one reason why I dodged around it in my story). Your storywriting skills are good, but Ibiki's behavior was enough to distract me when I was reading. Good try, though, I applaud you for taking the challenge. There are too many writers who are too scared or lazy to write Ibiki, so kudos to you. ^^
person Dementa
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Never seen that pairing before... Nice! Not overly fluffy either... Me likes! ^_~

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