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schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very well done. i've read alot of fics where naruto comes home after a long absence but this one is by far the best, in my opinion. I espeicially enjoyed naruto teaching sasuke's sons. Thank you for the fantastic read.
person Jazzy
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey i love your story. Why is it that i always pick an incomplete story that leaves off on a major cliffhanger the first time i read it? lol. Anyway. Can you add me to your story alert if you haven't already.! My email is at the top. anyway, continue writing. Your a great author!
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey love the story
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! What did Ry do to his face? o.o I wonder what all he said to the Mistress to get her to ask for Naruto's suspension? He is a crafty little devil.lol I hope Sasuke is ok after the waves crashed down on him. :(( Im so happy Neji is no longer angry at Naruto about Hinata's death. I cant wait to see who the Sensei will be for Team 5. LOL I hope he's worse than Naruto. :D
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T_________________T Konohamaru!!!! What did he have to repay??T__T Im so glad Sasuke and Naruto got together even if it was after such tragedy.:( Im also glad that Sasuke will come clean about Hinata's death and the fact that he and Naruto were lovers.:)
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad Sasuke and Naruto have resolved their past together. Poor Sasuke and the thought of his whole team being replaced. I hope he'll no longer carry that burden of despair for his fallen teammates. I also hope he follows behind Hikari and Naruto so he can know what Ry has been up to as far as his brother is concerned. I cant wait to find out the memory that Ry has in his head so he can move beyond his anger and maybe start to love his brother and himself possibly.:)
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, what a cute, sweet and somewhat awkward moment for the long time best friends.
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! Dont give up Sasuke please? T___T Im so glad Ryo was able to see how great Naruto is when fighting and maybe he'll gain a new respect for him. Also the kids will see how close their father and Sensei really are.:D I hope u have a great time and take lots of pics to put up on myspace or something for us to see.:D
Come back safely. Im so glad to have read this story, i really love it. I hope its not the end yet. I know Sasuke will be alright so he and Naruto can be together again and raise the kids together.:D That was a great chapter filled with lots of intense fighting i LOVED it!!! X3
person Telpei
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If Sasuke dies, I will hunt you down.

That is all.
person Hyarou
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooo, don't kill Sasuke!!! >8O

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