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by twistedsheets

person aimee
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cool idea for a sasunaru plot
love it, good plot, still mystery leaving us all wanting more
originality definate plus point

what a place to stop... dont leave it too long... suspense can kill
person ReY
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi... U write WELL!!!
i love it a lot!
This kind of pairng really suit them well. I mean, Sasuke should be persistent and wicked and evilish. and naruto is not whore, and he clearly wouldnt be whoring for Sasuke. So, I like it when Sasuke have to fight for what he wants and Naruto didnt give in easily... good work pal! Please CONTINUE... I WANT TO READ!!!!!
person izumi
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn!! i need a shower now!
person aeryn
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you so evil. you dare to stop there! >.< n with the way you evilly stopped there. i have a feeling there won't be a straight up hot lemon in the next. it'll be interrupted won't it?!!! >.<

you so evil.
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(formally Kawaii_kitsune_Thief) OMG! That chapter was soooo squirm worthy! It was totally awesome! I love it! I love it! I love it! More soon please!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nah, we won't kill ya but i will threaten to tie you down and force you to read naru X saku stories all night if you don't update soon. i mean, how can you stop can you just stop at a crucial (not to mention highly arousing) moment, like that? ^__^ this story is extremely good. i love naruto's little personality and how sasuke couldn't wait to hands get his hands on him. i, also, like friendship naruto has with neji. but, what's this? do i sense a love triangle happening in the nearby future or am i just being dilusional? anyway, looking foward to your next update. keep up the good work.
person hogo-chan
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how can you expect me not to be upset over that cliff hanger?! XD omg omg! That was fsckin' amazing! I love you forever! *hugs* and you probably wont be able to update for a while too! thats just sinful! but... I suppose your forgiven! ^_~ You did continue the story after all! you did a really excellent job with this chapter! please keep up with the good work!
person Heather
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh you are sooo incredibly evil for leaving us with that ending!!! i need more now!!! but seriously, great work so far. and ya know, naruto as a reporter actually does suit him. you wouldn't think so at first, but i really like how you took his personality into account when writing this story (unlike some people who make naruto out to be a bumbling idiot). and doesn't everybody love haku and zabuza? but i've got a question for you (not that it really matters all that much for the purpose of reading your story): did naruto and sasuke actually have a relationship? i know you've mentioned that they were lovers, but i was just curious if they were ever together or if they just slept together one time or something. but anywhoo...i can't wait for the next chapter (and hopefully a whole bunch of sasuke on naruto action)!!!
person kirameki
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!m D< You're evil! Evil!!!!!!! o_O More, please, hurry with the next chapter. So cruel. *sniff*
person Vermillion Spiral
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this has a lot of potential. Keep it up. ^_^

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