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OMG! I love it, and Sasuke's jealous!!! The pairing is good, but somehow I think Sasuke and Gaara are seeking Naruto's attention also. The way you said Gaara put his head on Naruto's shoulder was sweet, and I thought it showed that Gaara likes Naruto to. You may want to work on that, because it's going to be a booger later on in the chapters. Anyway good job, update soon, and if you have time check out my stories

Your story is awesome. It's getting me to open up to some characters that I'd never think I'd like to read in a story. I really hope you update soon. You have me hooked. I would love to know the reason behind title. Remember, no matter how weird or out-there you think the explanation may be, as long as it has meaning to you nothing else should matter :).

your amazing! I love you forever! this chapter was perfection! thank you for updating! wow! i really like that its neji/naru but now with this chapter i'm really rooting for sasu/naru! gah! so confoozed! but no matter what you choose, i'll still love you cuz your the most amazningest ever! ^_^ gawd i'm so lame...

OMG! Update soon,...very. I can't believe Naruto called him, are they going to go out? I wish and again update really soon plz!!!

I like it. I personally really like Sasuke and Itachi's relationship(the little you've shown us of it) because it seems natural that Sasuke wouldn't be close to anyone-even his brother. And car accident? Am I being blonde and don't remember that from the first chapter or have you not said anything yet? Either way, I really like how this might turn out. Few spelling mistakes and such, but I like your style. It's very easy to understand your writing and what you mean. Hope you do post this weekend, ciao!

This chapter was funny as hell! I love when Haku and Naruto sang in the car, It reminds me of the time my sisters and I did that! It was sooooo funny! I wonder if Sasuke or Gaara likes Naruto too....either way I love the way you made the characters all kool and funny, now I pity Shikamaru!

This has a VERY promising premise, I'm excited to see what you do with it! NejiNaru, even! I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU! There just isn't enough NejiNaru in the world, and I think they have great chemistry. I really like how you have this going, too. So, is Sasuke starting to like Naruto? I really would love to know, because if he is, this is going to get really interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Well, firstly with the characterization... personally I felt that outside of Shika and Naruto they all sounded the same. That is, they all had similar speech patterns & whatnot. It was hard to hear any distinction between Neji's internal monologue and Sasuke's, for example. Secondly, I dunno... with Gaara... he's just too damn hard to get a grip on. I CAN'T reconcile a 1st person pov with him, so I'm not gonna make any judgements on that. He's just so... *difficult*. It's hard to read too because I just can't see him so intimately/personally. I've mostly stuck to reading 3rd person pov's of him, but this is a good story so I'll get over it. Anyway, good stuff. Can'w wait to read more & I like where you're going with this. Keep it up!

P.S. I'm 90% certain that O- is the universal donor.