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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! this was entertaining!!! I ESPECIALLY like the part where Sasuke has to say that Naruto can kick his ass!! Tha twas great! If you don't keep going on this i will cry. you wouldn't want me to cry now would you?? o_O ^-^
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heehee...this was great! Sasuke's problem is so amusing, hahaha...!! Please update soon? this chapter's so cute.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please say that there will be more? ^__^
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far ^^ very well written and the details are nice too ^^ I liked how you expressed Sasuke's emotions the most. In a way, I feel sorry for Sasuke, with his confused thoughts and all, but then again, I love SasuNaru, so I wouldn't do anything to him.
Again, nice work and update soon! ^^
-Emina
Again, nice work and update soon! ^^
-Emina
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful so far! I look forward to reading more... please update soon!!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written! I quite enjoyed it- waiting for more!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was an interesting characterization of Sasuke. If you plan on writing more, then I will definately read and review. You've gotten my interest.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh...MORE!! That was fun. Oh the internal struggle, the drama, and the humor. Great job, I hope to see more. This is well written, so keep up the good work!
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good start! please update soon! ^_^
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"...by rolling to the side and leapt to his feet."
-leaping. ^_^
-leaping. ^_^