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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating -- keep up the good work!!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Thank you everyone for your nice and supporting comments! <3
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow .... well, Naruto is not as 'dobe' everyone think he is.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a good start man!!!! Please continue it's getting good!!!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very kawaii!!! Can't wait to find out what happens!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I loved it that was just awsome no i mean really liked it. Naruto is just so kwaii i could so see him doing somthing like that ^_^
just a little bit of construsctive critisism though. I know this is probably the effect of cop and past to aaf.net but its kinda hard to follow the dialouge when its all on one line. I can still read it but it might annoy some people.
Other than that is great ^_^ will there be a second chapter?? please say yes ^_^
just a little bit of construsctive critisism though. I know this is probably the effect of cop and past to aaf.net but its kinda hard to follow the dialouge when its all on one line. I can still read it but it might annoy some people.
Other than that is great ^_^ will there be a second chapter?? please say yes ^_^